8 Steps to Creating a Great Vision
Step 5: Review and redraft
When you're ready to revise, read your draft through from start to finish. Don't erase anything. You'll have plenty of opportunity to edit the content and the language. As you read through, keep in the back of your mind: Does this sound inspiring? Do I get excited when I'm reading it? Stay away from vague statements like "We're busier than ever"; instead, use real sales numbers that mean something. What are the key financial numbers that define success for you? Sales levels? Salary? Savings? Status?